公開課——如何寫建議信

1、 36. B 37. F 38. D 39. G 40. E 61. that 62. a 63. and 64. sounds 65. going 66. celebration 67. over 68. yourself 69. sent 70. beautifully Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man

2、who owned a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed them and return them to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lots but finally b

3、ecame a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had so many books, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of

4、 the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100

5、 years, and is wellknown at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. Whats more, if we move the zoo, some animals may die. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.Yours truly,Li Huawriting Dear Mr. Wang, Knowing that our library is going to buy books

6、, Id like to give some advice. What we need most are popular science books. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books:

7、 literary books. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.Yours sincerely, Li Yue建議信Ending express your hopeBeginning state your purposeBody give advice & reasons1. Im glad to receive your letter askin

8、g for my advice on2. I am writing to express my views concerning3. Knowing that, Id like to give some suggestions. A. state your purpose A. state your purpose sentence patterns B. give your B. give your advice advice 1. Its helpful/ important to2. It would be a good idea to3. I would like to suggest

9、 that C. express your hopeC. express your hope1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.3. Im sure if you take my advice, you will 表達愿望：表達愿望：5 5、我相信如果你接受我的建議，你會變、我相信如果你接受我的建議，你會變得更加苗條和保持健康。得更加苗條和保持健康。The use of sentence

10、patterns表明意圖：表明意圖：1. 1. 你給你給Jane 回回信就如何減肥提建議。信就如何減肥提建議。 提出建議：提出建議：2 2、健康飲食、健康飲食3 3、多鍛煉、多鍛煉4 4、喝足夠多的水、喝足夠多的水Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. It is important to have a healthy diet. It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to drink eno

11、ugh water. I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. 假設(shè)你叫李華，你的好朋友假設(shè)你叫李華，你的好朋友JaneJane最近發(fā)現(xiàn)自己最近發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在發(fā)胖，很苦惱。她寫信請你給她就如何減肥提建議。在發(fā)胖，很苦惱。她寫信請你給她就如何減肥提建議。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容給簡寫一封信，詞數(shù)請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容給簡寫一封信，詞數(shù)100100左右。左右。 1 1、健康飲食、健康飲食 2 2、多鍛煉、多鍛煉 3 3、喝足夠多的水、喝足夠多的水 It is helpful to do more exer

12、cise. It would be a good idea to drink enough water.It is important to have a healthy diet.Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet.In addition, it would be a good idea to drink enough water.Besides, it

13、 is helpful to do more exercise. I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits.The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. Because water can support our body and acti

14、vities, and help us lose weight.Dear Jane, Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give some suggestions. First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides, it also helps if you take more exercise. The more exer

15、cise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition, it should be a good idea to drink enough water, because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight. Im sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy. Looking forward to

16、 your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。 1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 2. 看中文書刊、電視； 3. 學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中國朋友。引出話題，表明寫作意圖1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班；2. 看中文書刊、電視；3. 學(xué)唱中文歌曲；4. 交中國朋友。提出建議：總結(jié)，表達愿望連接詞(多個建議+多個理由)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1 1、是否覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點、是否覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點2 2、是否恰當(dāng)使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)、是否恰當(dāng)使用語法結(jié)構(gòu) 3 3、是否運用多樣句式和豐富的詞匯、是否運用多樣句式和豐富的詞匯4 4、是否使用連

17、接詞、是否使用連接詞5 5、全文結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整合理、全文結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整合理Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it a

18、lso helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua1. memorize the sentence pat