2020年高考英語短文改錯(cuò)專練(一)(6)

1、短文改錯(cuò)專練（二）Test 12019 成都第三次診斷 Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream

2、college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad.

3、I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.答案與解析：Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done.

4、 After complete achievements had® completingthe online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed breathabout my dream college. However, except A offer from theUniversity of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight totally rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but tho

5、ught aboutwhat I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing® something from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For thisattitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.achievement改為achievements

6、考查名詞。根據(jù)該句中的 “all of”可知，這里表示不止一項(xiàng)成就，故要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。have改為had考查動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)本句中的“ listed”可知， 這里講述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，此處表示截止到過去這個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)我已 經(jīng)做的志愿者工作，故要用過去完成時(shí)。complete改為completing 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。介詞After后 面要用動(dòng)名詞，故應(yīng)改為 completing obreathe改為breath 考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的冠詞 a和形容 詞deep可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞，take a deep breath固定短語“深吸except后加an/the 考查冠詞。offer為可數(shù)名詞，故前面 要用限定詞修飾

7、；此處可表泛指，且offer的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭， 故用an；也可表特指，故用the。total改為totally 考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞got要用副詞形式。but改為and考查連詞?！拔覍⒆约烘i在房間里”和“思 考我所做的一切”之間不存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是順承關(guān)系，故要用 and。nothing改為 something 考查代詞。根據(jù)句中的“ even though”弁結(jié)合語境可知，雖然之前被拒絕讓“我”很傷心，但 是“我”也從中學(xué)到了一些東西，故要用 something。刪除made前的were 考查語態(tài)。此處表示那些拒絕讓我 傷心，應(yīng)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。For改為 With 考查介詞。此處表示“帶著這樣

8、一種態(tài) 度”，故應(yīng)用介詞With。Test 22019鄭州高三第一次質(zhì)量預(yù)測(cè) This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best- known attraction, where water se

9、em to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they

10、 are working hard make the city more beautiful.What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!答案與解析：This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply.Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among placesthe

11、m the West Lake is the best- known attraction, where water seem seemsto melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are severalmuseums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's locatedmore, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as® deliciousWest Lake

12、Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard A make the citymore beautiful.What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!How刪除had考查時(shí)態(tài)。had done為過去完成時(shí)，表示“過 去的過去”。但在此句中，visited先發(fā)生，impressed后發(fā)生，因 此用一般過去時(shí)，had多余，故刪除。a改為the考查冠詞。杭州為浙江省的省會(huì)，此處表示特 指，故把a(bǔ)改為t

13、he。place改為places考查名詞。place為可數(shù)名詞，且根據(jù)該 句中的“ a lot of”可知，此處應(yīng)用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。seem改為seems考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。根據(jù)該句中的“is”可知，此處敘述一般的情況，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；該從句的 主語是 water,是不可數(shù)名詞，故用 seemsby改為in 考查介詞。in the distance固定短語“在遠(yuǎn)處， 在遠(yuǎn)方”，故把by改為in。locating改為located 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。be located in固定 短語“位于”，此處省略了 be動(dòng)詞，故用過去分詞短語作后 置定語。deliciously改為delicious 考查形容詞

14、。根據(jù)語境及該句中 的“ local food ”，可知此處應(yīng)用形容詞 delicious obut改為and考查連詞。此處前面意為“這里的人友好、善良”，此處后面意為“他們正在努力工作以使這座城市更美 麗”，根據(jù)句意可知，前后句之間為弁列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，因此把but改為and。hard后加to 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。參見上題解析。此處應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語，故在 hard后加to。What改為How 考查感嘆句。根據(jù)該句中的“ attractive and inviting”以及“ How + adj. +主語+謂語”結(jié)構(gòu)可知， 此處應(yīng) 用How來引導(dǎo)該感嘆句。Test 32019 福建省

15、質(zhì)量檢查 As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work h

16、ard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.答案與解析：As everybo

17、dy know, parents are worried too much knowsabout their child , especially when the young meet with challenges. childrenSo do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when aimportant test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. talkingI'll let them know I have a goal and will w

18、ork hard to achieve them. it When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I ® convincedshould do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful unconditionallyto you in dealing A the relati

19、onship with your parents.know改為knows 考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。句意：眾所周知， 父母太擔(dān)心他們的孩子了，尤其是當(dāng)孩子遇到挑戰(zhàn)的時(shí)候。該句 陳述的是客觀情況，故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；主語為everybody,為第三 人稱單數(shù)，故謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。child改為children 考查名詞。該處表示“他們的孩子”， child為可數(shù)名詞，由該句中的“parents”和“ their”可知，該處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式children odo改為are考查倒裝句。句意：我的父母也是如此。此 處表示前一句話中的謂語所說明的情況也適用于本句主語；根據(jù) 前一句中的“ are worried” 可知

20、，該處應(yīng)用 are。a改為an考查冠詞。該處泛指“一場(chǎng)重要的考試”，故 用不定冠詞；important的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故用不定冠詞an。talked改為talking 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。about為介詞，后接 動(dòng)名詞talking作賓語。them改為it考查代詞。句意：“我”會(huì)讓他們知道“我” 有一個(gè)目標(biāo)弁且會(huì)努力地去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。此處代指前面的“a goal”，為單數(shù)，故用it。convincing改為convinced 考查固定用法。句意：當(dāng)他們 確信“我”會(huì)對(duì)“我”應(yīng)該做的事情負(fù)責(zé)時(shí)，他們想必不會(huì)感到 擔(dān)心。be convinced that固定短語“確信”。刪除that考查賓語從句。分析

21、句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，該處為賓 語從句，作介詞for的賓語，連接詞 what在從句中作do的賓語， 句子成分完整，that多余，故刪除。unconditional改為unconditionally考查副詞。一般用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，此處修飾動(dòng)詞love,故用副詞形式unconditionally odealing后加with 考查介詞。句意：我希望我的想法能對(duì) 你處理與父母之間的關(guān)系有所幫助。deal with固定短語“處理，應(yīng)付”。Test 42019 昆明質(zhì)量檢測(cè)Our school encouraged us toexperience some future careers last vacation

22、. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination

23、 in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.答案與解析：Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose

24、 to work as either chosecashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500student to join in the activity. I decided A be an assistant in a photostudio because of I love taking photos. With the help of aanadvanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically ski