原地單手肩上投籃.ppt

WritingPractice,ByLiuXiaolifromGuangyuanExperimentalHighSchool,Writingtask:,據(jù)一項調(diào)查顯示，大多數(shù)的中學(xué)生每天的睡眠時間少于7小時，有些甚至不到6個小時，請你就此現(xiàn)象從以下方面寫一篇英語短文。1.分析中學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因。2.提出你的看法。注意：詞數(shù)120詞左右。,Stepsforwriting,審,列,連,查,Outline,Openingpara:,學(xué)生睡眠的現(xiàn)狀,Body：,學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因,Closingpara：,自己的觀點和建議,Brainstorm,para1.Accordingtoarecentsurvey/Arecentsurveyshowsthat;havelessthan7hourssleep;nomorethan6hoursPara2.Whatsthereasonfor/Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingfor（導(dǎo)致）thisphenomenon（現(xiàn)象）./Therearechieflyreasonsforit.Foronething./Firstofall/Firstly/Tostart(begin)withareburdenedwithtoomuch；befacedwith;bebusydoingburythemselvesin/beabsorbedin;Foranother/Besides/Inaddition/Moreover/Whatsmorepaymoreattentiontoratherthan;beofgreatharmto/dodamageto/haveabadeffecton,Brainstorm,(Apartfromtheabovereasons.lackagoodlifestyle;stayuplatedoing;whichalsocontributetoalackofsleep)Para3.Asweallknow/Asisknowntoallgoodsleepessential/ofgreatimportanceto/fundamentalInordertoimprove.livingandstudyconditions;takemeasureswithoutdelay/immediatelyFirst/Firstofall/Tostartwith/Tobeginwith/Ontheonehandgivelesshomework/relievethestudentsfromgreatpressureSecond/Besides/Moreover/Whatsmore/OntheotherhandFindabetterwaytoteachandlearn/improvetheteachingandlearningefficiency（效率）,Brainstorm,Finally/Lastbutnotleast(getridof/formagoodlivinghabit/developagoodlivinghabit)Only.canwe.,Whatmakesagoodcomposition?,1.Istheessaydividedintoparagraphs?2.Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?1.areallthekeypointsstated?2.Iseverythingtothepoint?(切題)1.Doesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?2.Arethereanymistakes?3.Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary(高級詞匯)4.Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns(句式)?,Structure,Content,Language,Groupwork,1.Choosethesample.2.Checkandimprovethestructure.3.Correcterrorsandmistakes.4.Makethecompositionmorelogical.5.Presentyourcomposition,Apossibleversion,Arecentsurveyshowsthatmostofthemiddleschoolstudentsonlyhavelessthan7hourssleepeachday,someevennomorethan6hours,whichismuchlessthanrequired.Whatisthereasonforthisphenomenon?Mainlythereareseveralreasonsbehindthesituation.Firstofall,thestudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Theyhavetoburythemselvesindoinghomework.Anotherimportantreasonisthatschoolsandparentspaymoreattentionontheirgradesratherthantheirhealth.But,infact,thiswillbeofgreatharmtotheirhealth.Inordertoimprovethestudentslivingandstudyconditions,measuresshouldbetakenwithoutdelay.First,givethestudentslesshomework.Second,findabetterwaytoteachandlearn.Lastbutnotleast,improvingtheteachingandlearningefficiencyisthebestpolicy.,現(xiàn)象解釋類作文模板,Accordingtoarecentsurvey,85%percentofstudents_(說明現(xiàn)狀).Thereare_reasonsaccountingforthisphenomenon.Firstofall/Foronething,_(理由一).Besides,/Foranother,_(理由二).Whatismore,/Inaddition_（理由三）.Itsnaturalthat_(引起的后果)Inorderto_(改變現(xiàn)狀)，measuresshouldbetakenwithoutdeny.Ontheonehand_(措施一).Ontheotherhand,_(措施二).Lastbutnotleast,_(措施三)Only_can_.(結(jié)束語),Homework,1.Trytorecitesomeusefulexp