教學(xué)課件How to write a good composition.ppt

Tipsonagoodcomposition 1 goodandneathandwriting 書寫 2 fewmistakes especiallyinthefirstandlastparagraphsandthefirstandlastsentencesineachparagraph3 beautifulsentences4 coherenceandnaturaltransition 一致性和自然的過渡 5 structure 假定你是王強(qiáng) 福清人 有一批英國(guó)的交流生要來(lái)福清參觀學(xué)習(xí) 現(xiàn)在市政府正在招募與那些交流生年齡相當(dāng)?shù)母咧猩驹刚?來(lái)給這些交流生當(dāng)導(dǎo)游 你希望成為其中一員 請(qǐng)按要求用英語(yǔ)給市政府寫一封申請(qǐng)信 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括 個(gè)人情況 年齡 性別個(gè)人條件 英語(yǔ)好 愛好科學(xué)和文化 善于交往 樂于助人 熟悉本地情況 承諾 提供最佳服務(wù)注意 1 詞數(shù)120左右 2 交流生 exchangestudents DearSir Madam MynameisWangQiang IfeelliketoworkasvolunteertohelptheexchangestudentsfromEngland I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents First I mgoodatEnglish Second Ilikescienceandculture Third I mgoodatcommunicatewithothers Fourth Ilikehelpothers Last I mfamiliartoFuqing Itisimportanttothework Ifyougavemethechance I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservicetothem Iwon tdisappointingyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyourletter Yourssincerely WangQiang avolunteer communicating helping with give working for disappoint hearing fromyou DearSir Madam MynameisWangQiang IfeelliketoworkasvolunteertohelptheexchangestudentsfromEngland I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents First I mgoodatEnglish Second Ilikescienceandculture Third I mgoodatcommunicatewithothers Fourth Ilikehelpothers Last I mfamiliartoFuqing Itisimportanttothework Ifyougavemethechance I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservicetothem Iwon tdisappointingyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyourletter Yourssincerely WangQiang DearSir Madam MynameisWangQiang IfeelliketoworkasvolunteertohelptheexchangestudentsfromEngland I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents First I mgoodatEnglish Second Ilikescienceandculture Third I mgoodatcommunicatewithothers Fourth Ilikehelpothers Last I mfamiliartoFuqing Itisimportanttothework Ifyougavemethechance I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservicetothem Iwon tdisappointingyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyourletter Yourssincerely WangQiang DearSir Madam MynameisWangQiang IfeelliketoworkasvolunteertohelptheexchangestudentsfromEngland I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents First I mgoodatEnglish Second Ilikescienceandculture Third I mgoodatcommunicatewithothers Fourth Ilikehelpothers Last I mfamiliartoFuqing Itisimportanttothework Ifyougavemethechance I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservicetothem Iwon tdisappointingyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyourletter Yourssincerely WangQiang DearSir Madam MynameisWangQiang IfeelliketoworkasvolunteertohelptheexchangestudentsfromEngland I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents First I mgoodatEnglish Second Ilikescienceandculture Third I mgoodatcommunicatewithothers Fourth Ilikehelpothers Last I mfamiliartoFuqing Itisimportanttothework Ifyougavemethechance I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservicetothem Iwon tdisappointingyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyourletter Yourssincerely WangQiang thesamesubject I simplewordssimpletransitions 過渡詞 simplesentences fouraspects waysofimprovingthem usedifferentsentences 使用多樣句型 changethesubject 改變主語(yǔ) usegoodtransitions 使用好的過渡連接 useadvancedphrases 使用高級(jí)詞匯 changethesubject 改變主語(yǔ) 1 I llprovidethebestserviceforthem ismygoal ing形式作主語(yǔ) Itismygoal 用it形式主語(yǔ) 2 Ilikehelpingothers ing形式作主語(yǔ) 用it形式主語(yǔ) Providingthebestserviceforthem toprovidethebestserviceforthem Helpingothersismyfavorite whatIlike Itismyfavoritetohelpothers useadvancedphrases 選取高級(jí)詞匯 of great importance bereadyto bewillingto Word Phrase Ilikehelpingothers 2 Ilikescienceandculture 3 Thisisimportanttothework befondof beinterestedin havegreatinterestin useadvancedphrases 選取高級(jí)詞匯 Simplephrase Advancedphrase I mgoodatEnglish 2 I lltrymybesttoprovidethebestservice haveagoodknowledgeof haveagoodcommandof sparenoeffort makeeveryeffort makeefforts III usegoodtransitions 使用過渡連接 1 Phrases 選取高級(jí)連接詞 表層次順序 羅列增加 first second third fourth last tobegin startwith furthermore moreover inaddition lastbutnotleast firstandforemost besides what smore inadditiontothat lastbutnotleast III usegoodtransitions 使用過渡連接 2 Sentences 加上常見句型開頭 I mfamiliarwithFuqing Thereisno thatI mfamiliarwithFuqing Anotherreason thefactthatI mfamiliarwithFuqing liesin doubt usedifferentsentences 使用多樣句型 1 I mfamiliarwithFuqing It simportanttothework I mfamiliarwithFuqing 定語(yǔ)從句 2 I maboyandI m19 IwasborninFuqing I mastudentinFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool 過去分詞作狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)從句 whichisofgreatimportancetothework BorninFuqing I ma19 year oldboy whoisstudyinginFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool usedifferentsentences 使用多樣句型 3 Iwon tdisappointyou 倒裝 4 Ifyougivemethechance I llprovidethebestserviceforthem If thechance I llprovidethebestserviceforthem 使用省略 Onnoaccount 決不 willIdisappointyou given I llprovidethebestserviceforthem Itis that 使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句 5 Ilikescienceandcultureverymuch I likescienceandcultureverymuch 強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)詞 do Usedifferentsentences 使用多樣句型 thebestservice I llprovideforthem DearSirorMadam MynameisWangQiang Ifeellikeworkingasavolunteertohelptheexchangestudents BorninFuqing I ma19 year oldboy whoisstudyinginFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents Tobeginwith IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish Besides scienceandculturearewhatIlikeverymuch Furthermore I mgoodatcommunicatingwithothers Inaddition it smyfavoritetohelpothers Lastbutnotleast thereisnodoubtthatI mfamiliarwithFuqing whichisofgreatimportancetothework Ifgiventhechance I llsparenoefforttoprovidethebestserviceforthem OnnoaccountwillIdisappointyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou Yourssincerely WangQiang DearSirorMadam MynameisWangQiang Ifeellikeworkingasavolunteertohelptheexchangestudents BorninFuqing I ma19 year oldboy whoisstudyinginFuqingNo 1MiddleSchool Iwanttodosomethingfortheexchangestudents Tobeginwith IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish Besides scienceandculturearewhatIlikeverymuch Furthermore I mgoodatcommunicatingwithothers Inaddition it smyfavoritetohelpothers Lastbutnotleast thereisnodoubtthatI mfamiliarwithFuqing whichisofgreatimportancetothework Ifgiventhechance I llsparenoefforttoprovidethebestserviceforthem OnnoaccountwillIdisappointyou Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapplication Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou Yourssincerely WangQiang self introduction thebody thepurposeoftheletter thebeginning hopingtobeaccepted theending Practice 假定你是李華 從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡 Singapore 舉辦夏令營(yíng) 歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加 請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加 內(nèi)容主要包括 1 自我介紹 包括英語(yǔ)能力 2 參加意圖 介紹中國(guó) 了解其他國(guó)家 3 希望獲準(zhǔn)注意 1 詞數(shù)120左右2 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié) 以使行文連貫 structureParagraph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3 thepurposeofthee mail thebeginning self introductionandtheaimsoftakingpartinthesummercamp thebody hopingtobeaccepted theending Trytouse ingf