山西省霍州市高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練及參考范文（9）.doc

山西省霍州市2014高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練（9）及參考范文【四川省綿陽(yáng)市2014高考英語(yǔ)一模試題】書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿分25分)假設(shè)你是李華，今年夏天即將進(jìn)入倫敦大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是不知怎樣適應(yīng)國(guó)外大學(xué)的生活。所以寫(xiě)信給你的英國(guó)筆友john，結(jié)合下列其他大學(xué)新生經(jīng)常遇到的情況，尋求建議。1. 感到孤獨(dú)、經(jīng)常想家；2. 文化、食物、氣候不適應(yīng)；3. 在生活中不會(huì)照料自己；4. 難以找到滿意的房東；5. 教師全英授課難以理解。注意：1. 短信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2.詞數(shù)100左右。dear john,this summer i will go to study at london university, but i dont know how to adapt myself to the new life._li hua【參考范文】書(shū)面表達(dá)：（25分）one possible version: dear john,this summer i will go to study at london university, but i dont know how to adapt myself to the new life.i hear that many freshmen are at a loss what to do when they are in a foreign country. feeling lonely and homesick, they find it much harder to get used to the new culture, diet and climate. most of them cant take good care of themselves in their everyday life. besides, it is difficult to find a satisfying host and fully understand what the teachers teach in class since they speak english all the time.could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that i will be able to suit the university life in the future?yours,li hua【四川省綿陽(yáng)市2014高考英語(yǔ)一模試題】書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假如你是一名高三學(xué)生，經(jīng)常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見(jiàn)，今天你跟媽媽達(dá)成一致。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容，以 an argument 為題為英語(yǔ)廣場(chǎng)寫(xiě)一篇120字左右的英語(yǔ)短文。母親 高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重， 看電視浪費(fèi)時(shí)間; 兒子自制力差，看電視會(huì)影響視力; 兒子學(xué)習(xí)一天很疲勞，看電視可以放松一下;看電視也可以增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，了解國(guó)際國(guó)內(nèi)大事，緊跟時(shí)代;星期中不準(zhǔn)我看電視，但在周末允許我看新聞、文藝、體育或科普類節(jié)目注意： 1.短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù);2.參考表格中的內(nèi)容，但不要逐字翻譯;3.可以適當(dāng)增添合乎情理的過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言。i am a senior 3 student. i often quarrel with my mother over 【書(shū)面表達(dá)參考范文】i am a senior 3 student. i often quarrel with my mother over whether i can watch tv after school. my mother holds the view that students in senior 3, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch tv. it seems to her that once i am allowed to do that i will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. she also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch tv too often. but i really cant accept her ideas. i think it is relaxing to watch tv after a days hard work. not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. now we have at last reached an agreement that i can only watch tv at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.【湖南省懷化市2014高考英語(yǔ)3月一模試題】section c (25 marks) directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below in chinese. 假設(shè)你的筆友tony因上期高三期末數(shù)學(xué)考試未及格而倍受打擊，情緒低落。請(qǐng)你 (王華)寫(xiě)一封信給他，鼓勵(lì)他重拾自信，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；2、不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！緟⒖挤段摹縟ear tom,im sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.as senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced failure as well as success. there is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our setbacks. we should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make progress in our study. as for your anxiety, i think doing some sports is good for you because it can give you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.i hope all above can help you a lot. lets work hard together and turn our dream into reality. yours， wang hua【2014高考英語(yǔ)安徽省六校聯(lián)考】書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿分25分)手機(jī)和我們的生活越來(lái)越密切，讓我們的聯(lián)系變得更加方便，可有人認(rèn)為手機(jī)并不利于真正的交流。校報(bào)英文版正在開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，發(fā)起對(duì)這一話題的討論，你認(rèn)為手機(jī)對(duì)人與人之間溝通的影響是利大于弊還是弊大于利？請(qǐng)你以“mobile phones, good or bad for communication?”為題寫(xiě)篇短文向校報(bào)投稿，表達(dá)你的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右； 2. 短文題目已擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2. 文中不可出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息?；春觾砂?mobile phones, good or bad for communication?_ _【參考范文】one possible version mobile phones, good or bad for communication?the technology of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. someone can reach us or we can call someone wherever we are. however, people are unaware of the negative effects of mobile phones on communication.due to the convenience of mobile phones, many people have started to engage in social interaction in person less than before. in addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expressions and body language, without which communication becomes less personal. consequently, some people get confused and nervous while talking to a person face to face because they mostly talk to people on mobile phones. they even do not know the manners of communication. as far as i am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid depending too much on them.【2014四川省資陽(yáng)市第一次診斷性考試】書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分35分）假設(shè)你是李華，你的父母總是喜歡替你包辦一切，你覺(jué)得很苦惱。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信。1. 簡(jiǎn)述現(xiàn)象（兩種）；2. 分析弊端（兩個(gè)方面）；3. 你的觀點(diǎn)或建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：獨(dú)立性independencedear editor,id like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. my parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. _yours sincerely,li hua【評(píng)分原則】1. 本題總分為35分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于100的，從總分中減去2分。4. 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語(yǔ)言的得體性。5. 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。6. 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次?！菊Z(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤的界定】1. 考生必須以完整的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)出要點(diǎn)，如有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤視為半個(gè)要點(diǎn)。2. 考生如果以主從句表達(dá)要點(diǎn)，主句主謂結(jié)構(gòu)正確，從句主謂結(jié)構(gòu)有嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤，視為全點(diǎn)。3. 大小寫(xiě)和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，酌情扣1-2分。4. 重復(fù)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤只扣1分。5. 書(shū)寫(xiě)、卷面較差，影響判卷，扣1-2分。6. 詞數(shù)少于100詞扣2分；7. 下列情況不給分：所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容與試題要點(diǎn)無(wú)關(guān)；錯(cuò)誤已經(jīng)影響意義的表達(dá)；只寫(xiě)出零星的相關(guān)詞匯而無(wú)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)?！緝?nèi)容要點(diǎn)】1. 兩種現(xiàn)象；2. 兩個(gè)弊端；3. 你的觀點(diǎn)或建議。【各檔次給分范圍和要求】第五檔（2935分）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第四檔（2228分）完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn)，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因?yàn)閲L試較復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致。應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第三檔（1521分）基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句間連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第二檔（814分）未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。較少使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔（17分）未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)了一些無(wú)關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限。較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響對(duì)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的理解。缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。0分未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無(wú)法評(píng)判；寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無(wú)關(guān)或所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容無(wú)法看清。五、說(shuō)明1. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。2. 對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分?！緟⒖挤段摹縪ne possible version:dear editor,id like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. my parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. they choose the school and s