連詞在書面表達中的作用.ppt

What should a good composition be?,What do you think of this composition? Is it a good one? If not, whats the problem?,I got up early. I was very happy, it was a fine day. I got to the beach, lots of people had been there. It was very cold, no one complained. Someone shouted: ”Look”, the clouds were turning red . A small part of the sun was appearing .it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. The clouds and the sea water became red and bright. All were excited to see the sun rising.,1.I got up early. 2.I was very happy. 3.It was a fine day. 4.I got to the beach. 5.Lots of people had been there. 6.It was very cold. 7.No one complained. 8.Someone shouted: ”Look”. 9.The clouds were turning red . 10.A small part of the sun was appearing . 11.It broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. 12.The clouds and the sea water became red and bright. 13. All were excited to see the sun rising.,Then,how to write a good English composition?,專題復習,Ding ding,連接詞在英語書面表達中的使用,to write a good composition, we should know how to use linking words correctly.,In a word,lets learn some useful linking words.,Now,first, second, then, finally, next, after that,such as, for example,or, and, also, too,but, however, instead,now, at first, when, after,so, sothat, as a result, therefore,that is to say, in other words,though, although.,because, since, as, for,in all, in short, in one word.,besides, whats more.,Practice Use linking words to link the sentence.,1. His train ride seemed really short, _ his memory of the happy trip will last long.,but,Practice Use linking words to link the sentence.,2. _ he is not very tall in the basketball field, his wonderful skill always helps him to win the games.,Though/Although,Practice Use linking words to link the sentence.,3. I didnt forget to set the alarm clock _ hoped that it would call me at 6:30 in the morning.,and,Practice Use linking words to link the sentence.,4. _ I got on the bus, I found I got on the wrong bus. _ I got off _ called a taxi.,After/When/As soon as,So,and,Practice Use linking words to link the sentence,5._ tell myself not to worry about exams, I always do! _ I am not surprised that my students worry about them too, even though they usually dont need to. _ , since it is hard not to worry at all, we must try not to worry too much.,Though/Although,So,However,Practice Add some linking words to improve this passage,I got up early. I was very happy, it was a fine day. I got to the beach, lots of people had been there. It was very cold, no one complained. Someone shouted: “Look”, the clouds were turning red . A small part of the sun was appearing .it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. The clouds and the sea water became red and bright. All were excited to see the sun rising.,I got up early. I was very happy, it was a fine day. I got to the beach, lots of people had been there. The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, lots of people had been there.,It was very cold, no one complained. Someone shouted: “Look”, the clouds were turning red . It was very cold, but no one complained. Suddenly someone shouted: “Look”, the clouds were turning red .,A small part of the sun was appearing .it broke through the red clouds and sea water became red and bright. All were excited jumped above the sea. The clouds and the to see the sun rising. At first, a small part of the sun was appearing . Then it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright. As last all were excited to see the sun rising.,The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, lots of people had been there. It was very cold, but no one complained. Suddenly someone shouted: “Look”, the clouds were turning red . At first, a small part of the sun was appearing . Then it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright. As last all were excited to see the sun rising.,Write a passage according to the pictures. Try to use linking words in your writing.,右邊5幅圖是Mr. Black和他的兒子Mike在星期天去湖邊釣魚的故事. 請把整個故事的情節(jié)寫出來,單詞數(shù)80個左右.要求用過去時態(tài)來敘述.,One of the possible version,On Sunday morning, Mr. Black and his son, Mike, got up very early and went fishing by a lake. They didnt catch any fish until noon. Though they caught only one fish, they felt happy because the fish was quite big. When they were leaving, Mike noticed a board by the lake side. Then Mike returned and threw the fish back into the lake. At first, Mr. Black was surprised. Then Mike po