2018_2019學(xué)年高中英語Unit18BeautySectionⅥ（自修課）Writing—影視評(píng)論學(xué)案（含解析）.docx

Section (自修課) Writing影視評(píng)論影視評(píng)論簡稱影評(píng)，一般包括對(duì)影片的背景、故事梗概、觀眾最有印象的部分等的介紹以及對(duì)影片的評(píng)價(jià)。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)影評(píng)適宜采用“三段式”寫法：1第一段：背景介紹。在評(píng)論之前，作者要讓讀者了解電影的大致情況。因此，對(duì)影片背景的介紹很有必要。背景介紹通常包括故事背景、演職人員和獲獎(jiǎng)情況等。2第二段：內(nèi)容簡介。影片內(nèi)容的介紹要簡明扼要，要清楚地交代故事的情節(jié)，尤其是與影評(píng)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。應(yīng)力求客觀，以使讀者對(duì)故事情節(jié)有所了解。3第三段：發(fā)表評(píng)論。這一部分是寫作重點(diǎn)，也是影評(píng)的中心部分，可以選擇性地從不同角度對(duì)電影的主題、情節(jié)、演員的演技等方面有針對(duì)性地發(fā)表個(gè)人看法，最后對(duì)電影進(jìn)行總體性的評(píng)價(jià)。如果認(rèn)為有必要，也可推薦給其他人觀看。注意：對(duì)電影所發(fā)表的觀點(diǎn)通常用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。此外要注意評(píng)論的公正性、客觀性，不可過于偏激。二、增分佳句1對(duì)影片的概述The film . directed by . is a story about .The film . is set in .The film is a love (romantic/moving) story.2對(duì)影片的評(píng)價(jià)This is a very touching film, a mustsee.My favourite part of the film is .Judging from the wild clapping and cheers that filled the cinema, everybody agreed that it was indeed the best film of the year.However, many people have complained that the film is too .Im disappointed with the film because .Many viewers have expressed great dissatisfaction with the movie.Even with these small problems, the film is still a great one, and I really enjoy it!Personally, I think the advantages carry more weight than the disadvantages.The scenery, and the backgrounds seem very real and beautiful/splendid/wonderful.題目要求好萊塢電影阿凡達(dá)(Avatar)早已在中國大陸上映。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，介紹該電影的有關(guān)情況及你的感想。短文必須包括以下信息：1阿凡達(dá)在中國大陸上映時(shí)，超過了泰坦尼克號(hào)(Titanic)，創(chuàng)票房(boxoffice)新紀(jì)錄。2電影的拍攝歷時(shí)五年多，是最昂貴的電影之一。贏得了金球獎(jiǎng)(Golden Globe)，獲得了九項(xiàng)奧斯卡提名(an Oscar nomination)。3該電影以2154年為背景，講述了一個(gè)殘疾(disabled)軍人被派往潘多拉星球(Pandora)去說服那里的人們讓地球人在他們的家園開采自然資源的故事。4你的感想注意：詞數(shù)100左右。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1確定體裁：本文為影視評(píng)論；2確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱；3確定時(shí)態(tài)：寫影評(píng)通常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。二、構(gòu)思第一部分，上映時(shí)的情況。第二部分，拍攝及獲獎(jiǎng)情況和電影簡介。第三部分，自己的感受。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1at_that_time在當(dāng)時(shí)2more_than 多于；不僅僅3evident/obvious 明顯的4accompanied_with/as_well_as 和，以及5be_set_in 以為背景6try_to_persuade 試圖說服7live_in_harmony_ 和睦相處8instead_of 而不是第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1阿凡達(dá)早已在大陸上映。(被動(dòng)語態(tài))Avatar was shown on the Chinese mainland.2它超過了泰坦尼克號(hào)，創(chuàng)造了當(dāng)時(shí)的票房新紀(jì)錄。(that定語從句；現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語)It_broke_the_record_that_was_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.3該電影拍攝歷時(shí)五年多，很顯然是最昂貴的電影之一。(more than; it作形式主語)It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films.4它贏得了金球獎(jiǎng)，并獲得了九項(xiàng)奧斯卡提名。It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations.5電影以2154為背景。It_is_set_in_2154.6電影講述了一個(gè)殘疾軍人被派往潘多拉星球。(who引導(dǎo)定語從句)The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora.7他試圖說服那里的人們讓地球人在他們的家園開采自然資源。He_tried_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.8在我看來，這是最成功的電影之一。In_my_opinion,_this_is_one_of_the_most_successful_films.9從電影中，我了解到不同種族的人們應(yīng)該互相尊重、和諧相處而不是兵戎相見。(that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)From_it,_I_learn_that_different_races_should_respect_each_other_and_live_in_harmony_instead_of_being_at_war.第四步：句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)1用定語從句及現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語改寫句1和句2Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.2用不定式作目的狀語連接句6和句7The_film_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_natural_resources.第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇A_Hollywood_film,_Avatar,_which_was_shown_on_the_Chinese_mainland,_broke_the_record_set_by_Titanic,_becoming_the_highest_boxoffice_film_at_that_time.It_took_more_than_five_years_to_make_the_film_and_it_is_evident_that_its_one_of_the_most_expensive_films._It_won_a_Golden_Globe_accompanied_with_nine_Oscar_nominations._The_film_is_set_in_2154_and_tells_a_story_of_a_disabled_soldier_who_is_sent_to_Pandora_to_try_to_persuade_the_inhabitants_to_let_his_mates_mine_their_homeland_for_na